This week for writing we had to do a persuasive writing. Then we got peered up with a buddy and then we had to write a comment on their writing and then add them in. So here are the screenshots for the comments.
This is what I added:
1. rhetorical question in my first paragraph.
2. rhetorical question in my second paragraph.
3. More detail in my third paragraph.
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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