Writing

For writing this week we picked a topic that we wanted to write about and then made into a persuasive argument. My topic was "Money cant buy happiness" this is my writing.

                                             

                                                Money cant buy happiness

                             

Introduction: Money is just a tool in your life, I don't think it can buy your happiness. Because happiness is a feeling not something you find in a store. sure your buy things that can make you happy but those thing don't last long.   

Main point 1: First let’s talk about, how you could have all the money in the world but it still wouldn't matter because if your brain is unhappy you are unhappy. Researchers surveyed more than 450,000 people to look for a correlation between each person's emotional wellbeing and their level of income. The researchers found that money does increase one's emotional wellbeing, but only up to a certain point. Up to $75,000 per year. 

Main point 2: Your money isn't the thing that is going to make you happy true happiness comes from within. To be happy you need good social relationships, good mental health and good physical health. Your money isn’t going to make all that happen. 

Main point 3: I don't think you should have to have money to be happy. Because money doesn't last forever and the happiness that comes along with wont either. Your money isn't the most important thing in the world. 

Conclusion: Your happiness is more important then your money. Because your happiness determines your mood, your attitude and the way you feel about life. Rhetorical Question: What would you rather a happy life, or a unhappy life with money?